TEF Canada · Expression écrite

Writing Toolkit — Rubrics, Error Codes & Templates

The one-page spine of the writing course. How you're graded, the exact codes we mark your mistakes with, and the fill-in templates for both exam tasks. Explanations in English; every model in French.

How you're graded

  • The TEF reports Expression écrite on a /450 scale.
  • Below is our internal training rubric — the same grid the site's trainer applies — aligned with the criterion families the test maker publishes (relevance, development, coherence, cohesion, language quality, spelling).
  • Target for CRS points: NCLC 7 (roughly B2).
  • Safety floor for PR eligibility: NCLC 5.

Read the band strips like this

CLB 5 = you're over the PR line but rough. CLB 7 = the money target: controlled, structured, few errors. CLB 9 = near-native polish. Aim your writing at the CLB 7 column; treat CLB 9 as a stretch.

Section A — Le fait divers (continue a news item · 80+ words · 25 min)

PertinenceRelevance & new information

Does your continuation fit the opening and add genuinely new events? You must move the story forward — invent what happened next.

✕ Recopying or summarizing the given opening earns zero and wastes time. This is the single biggest Section-A mistake.

CLB 5

On topic but thin — one or two obvious facts added.

CLB 7

Clear, believable chain of new events that fits the opening.

CLB 9

Vivid, coherent, unexpected-but-logical developments.

InformationDevelopment & detail

Richness of detail: who, what, where, when, how, why. Witnesses, emergency services, causes, consequences, reactions.

CLB 5

Bare facts, little detail.

CLB 7

Each event fleshed out with concrete, plausible detail.

CLB 9

Layered detail; cause → consequence made explicit.

CohérenceCoherence & chronology

Clear time order and linked sentences. Time connectors (soudain, peu après, finalement) and cause links (c'est pourquoi, si bien que) carry the story.

CLB 5

Understandable but choppy; few connectors.

CLB 7

Smooth chronology; varied, correct connectors.

CLB 9

Seamless flow; every sentence earns its place.

VocabulaireVocabulary

Varied, precise, journalistic word choice — not the same three verbs repeated.

CLB 5

Basic, repetitive (il y a, faire, dire).

CLB 7

Precise verbs & nouns; some news register.

CLB 9

Rich, idiomatic, consistently neutral news tone.

OrthographeSpelling, accents & punctuation

Accents (é/è/ê), agreement, punctuation. The easiest points to lose — and to recover in the 5-minute proofread.

CLB 5

Frequent slips that occasionally block meaning.

CLB 7

Minor, non-blocking errors only.

CLB 9

Near error-free.

Two make-or-break checks the grader also runs

Ton (tone): stay neutral, 3rd person — no personal opinion in a news item.  ·  Récit (tenses): narrate in the past — passé composé for events, imparfait for background. Mixing in présent is an instant giveaway.

Section B — L'argumentation (react to a statement · 200+ words · 35 min · letter frame optional)

PositionClear stance

Take a clear side in the introduction — pour, contre, or nuanced — and hold it.

CLB 5

Opinion present but vague or wobbling.

CLB 7

Explicit thesis stated up front, defended throughout.

CLB 9

Nuanced, confident position with rhetorical control.

ArgumentsDevelopment & examples

At least 3 developed arguments, each with an example (claim → because → example).

✕ Three one-line assertions with no examples caps you below CLB 7.

CLB 5

2–3 thin reasons, examples missing.

CLB 7

3 arguments, each illustrated with an example.

CLB 9

Developed arguments + a genuine concession.

ConnecteursLogical connectors

Varied linking words that signal structure: addition, contrast, cause, example, conclusion.

CLB 5

Mostly et / mais / parce que, repeated.

CLB 7

Range: d'une part, en revanche, par ailleurs, en effet.

CLB 9

Precise, unobtrusive; connectors carry the logic.

RegistreFormal register

Formal, polite, vouvoiement. Opening + closing formulas. No texting tone.

CLB 5

Slips into casual/spoken phrasing.

CLB 7

Consistently formal; correct letter formulas.

CLB 9

Elegant, controlled formal voice.

GrammaireGrammar & syntax

Correct complex sentences (subordination, relatives), agreement, tenses.

CLB 5

Simple sentences; recurring errors.

CLB 7

Complex sentences attempted & mostly correct.

CLB 9

Varied structures, near error-free.

Two make-or-break checks the grader also runs

Pertinence: answer the actual question asked — going off-topic sinks the score.  ·  Subjonctif: where you use it (bien que, il faut que), it must be correct. Use a small safe set rather than reaching and slipping.

Error codes

When we correct your writing we mark each mistake with a short code in the margin — then you fix it yourself (that's where the learning happens). The first six codes are flagged automatically by the trainer; the rest are marked during human review.

CodeMeansExample — wrong → rightFlagged
accordAgreement (gender / number / past participle)elle est allé → elle est alléeauto
tempsWrong tense (esp. PC vs imparfait, or présent in narration)hier, il mange → hier, il a mangéauto
prepositionWrong / missing prepositionje pense à que… → je pense que…auto
orthographeSpelling & accentsun evenement tres → un événement trèsauto
syntaxeWord order / sentence structureje suis d'accord pas → je ne suis pas d'accordauto
registreRegister too casual (Section B)c'est trop bien → cela présente un réel intérêtauto
calque"English in French" — literal translationfaire une décision → prendre une décisionby hand
articleWrong / missing article (du, de la, des)je bois eau → je bois de l'eauby hand
vocabWeak or imprecise word — upgrade itil y a un problème → un problème se poseby hand
connecteurConnector missing or misused…deux raisons. Les écrans… → …deux raisons. D'abord, les écrans…by hand
repetitionSame word repeated — vary itles gens… les gens… les gens → les gens… la population… chacunby hand
✓✓Good — do more of this (we mark strengths, not only errors)un bel emploi du subjonctif !by hand
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  • The correction loop: we mark codes → you rewrite the sentence correctly → the error goes on your personal weakness list.
  • We never hand you the fixed version first — finding it yourself is the lesson.
  • For beginners we mark only 2–3 error types per piece so you're not drowning in red.

Section A — the fait divers, step by step

You're given the opening lines of a news item. Continue the story in the past, neutrally, adding new events. Here is the skeleton to fill, then a model built on it.

Hook — the first new fact
What happened next? One clear new event in the past tense.
« Peu après, les pompiers sont intervenus… »
Develop — who / what / where / how
Flesh it out: witnesses, services, place, manner. Use imparfait for background, passé composé for events.
« Selon un témoin, la fumée envahissait déjà l'immeuble… »
Cause & consequence
Why it happened and what resulted. This is where coherence points live.
« L'incendie serait dû à un court-circuit ; c'est pourquoi… »
Natural ending
Close it — outcome, official reaction, or aftermath. Don't stop mid-air.
« Finalement, aucun blessé n'a été signalé. »

Annotated model (~95 words · original)

verb tense (past) connector concrete detail precise vocabulary
Given opening — continue it

Hier soir, vers 21 h, un violent orage a provoqué une panne d'électricité dans tout le quartier de Saint-Léonard. Les habitants se sont retrouvés dans le noir…

Model continuationNeutral · past tenses
  • Peu après, plusieurs riverains ont signalé des chutes de branches sur la voie publique.
  • Selon un témoin, un arbre s'était abattu sur une voiture stationnée devant la boulangerie.
  • Les services de secours sont intervenus vers 22 h pour dégager la chaussée et sécuriser les câbles arrachés.

D'après la municipalité, la panne était due à la foudre ; c'est pourquoi le courant n'a été rétabli qu'au petit matin. Finalement, aucun blessé n'a été signalé, mais plusieurs commerçants ont déploré des pertes de marchandises.

Why this scores: every sentence adds a new fact (never repeats the opening), the past tenses alternate correctly (imparfait était/envahissait for background, passé composé for events, one plus-que-parfait s'était abattu for "what had happened before"), connectors drive the chronology, and the tone stays neutral — no "I think". It ends cleanly.

Topic templates (pick your scenario · fill the slots)

  • The model above shows the moves. These give you a ready skeleton for each kind of news item the TEF throws at you — same four steps, but with the connectors and opening phrases already tuned to the scenario.
  • Choose a topic, borrow the phrase kit, and write your own new facts on top.
  • Full worked models for each live in Section A model continuations.

Section B — the argumentation, step by step

  • You react to a statement from a newspaper and defend your opinion in a structured, formal argumentation.
  • The skeleton below uses the classic letter frame — a safe optional template (the test maker states a letter layout is not required; your arguments are what is scored).
  • Fill it, then study the model built on it.
Opening formula + thesis
Polite opening, reformulate the topic, state your position, announce 3 axes.
« Madame, Monsieur, … Selon moi, … pour trois raisons principales. »
Argument 1 + example
Connector → claim → parce que → example.
« D'abord, … En effet, … Par exemple, … »
Argument 2 + example
New connector, second reason, illustrated.
« Par ailleurs, … »
Concession + rebuttal (Argument 3)
Admit the other side, then answer it — this is what lifts you to CLB 7+.
« Certes, … ; néanmoins, … »
Conclusion + closing formula
Restate the position, broaden it, then the polite sign-off.
« En conclusion, … Je vous prie d'agréer… »

Annotated model (~225 words · original)

structure signpost opinion / stance connector example precise vocabulary
Statement to react to

« Les téléphones portables devraient être interdits dans les écoles secondaires. »

Model letterFormal · vouvoiement

Madame, Monsieur,

J'ai lu avec intérêt votre article sur l'interdiction des téléphones portables au lycée. Pour ma part, je suis convaincu que cette mesure serait bénéfique, et ce pour trois raisons.

D'abord, le téléphone nuit à la concentration des élèves. En effet, les notifications interrompent sans cesse les cours. Par exemple, une étude récente a montré qu'un élève distrait met vingt minutes à se reconcentrer.

Par ailleurs, cette interdiction favoriserait les liens sociaux. Privés d'écran, les adolescents se parlent davantage pendant la pause.

Certes, le téléphone peut constituer un outil pédagogique ; néanmoins, il me semble qu'une tablette fournie par l'école remplirait ce rôle sans les inconvénients des réseaux sociaux.

En conclusion, je reste persuadé que limiter le portable au lycée profiterait à tous. Je vous prie d'agréer, Madame, Monsieur, l'expression de mes salutations distinguées.

Why this scores: the signposts give it a spine (opening → thesis → 3 axes → conclusion → sign-off), the stance phrases keep the position visible, every argument carries a real example, the connectors are varied (not just et/mais), and the Certes… néanmoins concession is exactly the move that separates CLB 7 from CLB 5. Register stays formal throughout.

Topic templates (pick your theme · fill the slots)

  • The five moves never change — only the theme does.
  • Each template keeps the same spine (opening + thesis → two arguments → concession → conclusion) but pre-loads a realistic statement and a phrase kit for that theme.
  • Pick the one closest to your prompt, then supply your own examples.
  • Full worked letters for each live in Section B model letters.